Bringing in Teyla's telepathic abilities in such a subtle way was neat
The working title of the story was 'Cumulative Dysfunction' - the inability to function was supposed to come up slowly - and I really wanted the little quirks of them all to come through, exacerbated by the road-trip-ness of the story.
As for Rodney and Ronon...
John has a feeling he's missing something.
Oh, John.
Tee-hee. I'm really fond of hitting John upside the head with emotional stuff. *is mean and nasty that way* ;)
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Date: 2006-07-09 12:51 am (UTC)The working title of the story was 'Cumulative Dysfunction' - the inability to function was supposed to come up slowly - and I really wanted the little quirks of them all to come through, exacerbated by the road-trip-ness of the story.
As for Rodney and Ronon...
John has a feeling he's missing something.
Oh, John.
Tee-hee. I'm really fond of hitting John upside the head with emotional stuff. *is mean and nasty that way* ;)
Thanks for the feedback!