Kavanaugh’s role in the series is largely to shine a light on Elizabeth’s actions by making some very pertinent comments. In the story, I felt that he would perceive a military commander as perhaps the lesser of two evils, with a soupcon of revenge i.e. the replacement of a blatantly unsuitable coordinator, who condones torture, with a military representative.
Honestly, I do think that this story would benefit from some tweaking and rewriting.
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Date: 2007-11-23 03:02 pm (UTC)Honestly, I do think that this story would benefit from some tweaking and rewriting.