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Rating: PG-13
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, Atlantis
Summary: A city does not think except in terms of 'rational' and 'irrational'; it is designed to protect itself from everything... even it's inhabitants.
They are asking her to decide the fates of a hundred thousand people, to choose: her city, or someone else’s entire world. Knowing that they are watching her, looking for guidance, for the leader she’s supposed to be,
“I need to think.”
When she reaches the doors, Atlantis keeps them shut, sensing that its existence hangs in the balance. But she needs this, this small bit of normality in a life that has gone far out of her control.
“Let go.” Her hand rests against the cool metal, the raised design. “LET GO.”
Slowly, startled, the city reluctantly releases its hold on the doors.
It is the first time someone has rejected Atlantis’ courtesy, has broken free of the complex system of neurons and electrons and life signs. For once at a loss, the city tracks her movement down the hall, frantically ransacking the databases and storage banks.
Atlantis seizes that thought, queries a computer. Listens to its response.
Satisfied, now that it has an answer and a course of action, it settles itself into the familiar pathways and begins to act.
Threat, the computer had whispered. Elizabeth Weir is a threat to the city.
…and as such has to be eliminated.
With a silent command, Atlantis slides the corridor doors shut and releases the first wisps of halon gas.
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Date: 2007-12-19 04:23 am (UTC)The idea of a sentient Atlantis always creeps me out, and you captured that perfectly
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Date: 2007-12-20 03:21 am (UTC)Thanks!
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Date: 2007-12-19 04:50 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-12-20 03:34 am (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2007-12-19 05:24 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-12-20 03:43 am (UTC)As for what happens... that's up to you. Does Rodney hack the system in time to save her? Or does she flicker out on the control screens, only a ghost of a life sign? ;) Thanks for reading!
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Date: 2007-12-19 01:58 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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